I was going horse back riding.
My mom grabbed the camera.
Excited, I was riding a new horse.
His name was Dezzy.
I went on then I started to trot.
A swarm of birds went by.
It scared my horse.
He jumped!
I flew off.
Then I started back on.
My trainer said I had to fall off three times.
To become
A REAL HORSE BACK RIDER.
3 responses so far ↓
Kayla // February 1, 2007 at 5:20 pm |
I LOVE HORSES! I have 3, and I falloff a lot too. Your poem has made me want to write a poem about my horses! Thanks!
victoria // February 1, 2007 at 11:05 pm |
Jessica Jessica Jessica,
I liked you poem!! Nice white space!! i liked the middle and the end it really felt as if i was with you and of course dezzy!!!
Julie // March 27, 2008 at 10:57 pm |
great job! I love riding too.