Sittin in my seat
Whats that?..
Zoom!!
Wow!
fast start
Ahh!
Were
going
down
Wee!
I don’t feel well..
Oh.. now what?
A loop!
great!
Where are we
going?
Help!
Welcome back!
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5 responses so far ↓
jeffrey // January 31, 2007 at 2:38 pm |
it’s great how you used white space and you didn’t have to tell me you were on a roller coaster!
Trent // February 1, 2007 at 6:04 pm |
Very interesting poem. I enjoyed it very much, like I was on the ride too. Trent from CT (New Milford)
jessica // March 24, 2007 at 1:39 am |
Victoria I like the way used white space in the poem and the way you dacrided it is very interesting. I hope that you enjoy when you write. Good luke!
Kaleigh // October 16, 2007 at 2:17 am |
good job victoria
Nick A // January 20, 2008 at 4:44 pm |
i liked ur detail