I lost the game
I was the blame
I wanted to go to the hall of fame
But I went to the hall of shame
I looked lame,had a dare to claim
And from now on I wont do the same,
I also have a wierd nickname
Then I went to Maine,on a train
Went on aim
Had to maintain in my house
While wearing a blouse!!!!!!
7 responses so far ↓
kevin // January 26, 2007 at 7:03 pm |
Very funny. Nice ryming, good imagination!!!!!!!!
zach p // January 27, 2007 at 2:10 am |
very funny i love it it made me laugh so many times
!!!!!
Nick Aronica // January 27, 2007 at 2:45 pm |
heyy, Zach nice work liked the way you rymed it for every sentence and how you use funny language and how you told us where you were at all times for example “you went to maine on a train and went on aim and i had to maintain in my house while a blouse
victoria // January 28, 2007 at 9:08 pm |
Zach,
That was great i liked how everyline rymed!! it was also pretty funny !! nice work!!
Richie // January 30, 2007 at 12:08 am |
The rhyming was awesome,
and it made a lot of sense.
Good job!
Carly // February 1, 2007 at 6:06 pm |
Nice job. It moved from line to line pretty quickly and it was good to have a rhyming word at the end of each line.
Nick M // February 2, 2007 at 12:42 am |
i liked how you ryhmed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!